Imperial 10 & 11 (39 & 40)
Thursday, May 24th, 2007Whoo! Two standard scenarios in a single day! … Moving on.
First, Imperial 10. This scenario is kind of fucked up, actually. Any other Imperial testers, please keep an eye on this scenario. If I have any time I’ll go through it again.
On secret tiles: could only check S10’s (15, 29), and it was good.
1. Intro: “Thanks to Laird’s diligent / scouting, the location of the / Baldean ruins were uncovered.” Strike that “were,” and replace with “was.” The location was uncovered.
2. Erwin tries not to fight Aaron, and has this to say about his army: “They might be preparing a welcome.” I realise “welcome” is indeed a noun, but the sentence seems so odd; and I have no suggestions
. Feel free to leave it as is.
3. Aaron gives some orders. One of his commanders replies: “Aah!” A simple “Sir!” or “Yes, sir!” would be better.
4. One of Aaron’s commanders prepares to attack me saying the following words: “Defeat is unbefitting for our Empire … But it will complement you quite nicely!” I’m not feeling very creative this evening, so my suggestion is to simply swap “our Empire” with “our Company.” >shrug<
5. Close to the end of the scenario, once I reach the other side of the bridge, the following exchange takes place:
Aaron: “We have come so far / without help … / This win will be the Empire’s.”
Aaron: “The real enemy / is your own selfishness.”
Leon: “It’s only natural!”
WTF?
6. Once the scenario is clear:
Rohga: “The disturbance to Baldea is over … for now.”
Erwin: “Now, on to Baldea! / It’s just a few steps away!”
Call me crazy, but I believe the disturbance to Baldea hasn’t even begun! Another lovely WTF Moment(TM) where I am at a loss for suitable corrections.
Scenario 11 fares better. The Holy Blade’s Mystery.
7. Intro: “Once again, the volatile continent, / El Sallia, gives rise to a / struggle for the holy sword.” I don’t think it’s the continent that gives rise to the struggle. It could bare witness, maybe.
8. After I get Langrisser, Erwin goes on and on about how powerful the sword is and whatnot. And then Erwin himself asks:
“Are you sure you want to give up such a thing?”
And after you choose “Yes:”
Erwin: “Good point.”
Erwin: “I will take Langrisser for the Kaiser, and together we bring peace and order!”
Consider:
“Should I really give up such a thing?”
[Yes.] “All right.”
“I will take Langrisser for the Kaiser, and together we will bring peace and order!” Note the added “will.”

