Scenario 17(28) end + Scenario 18
I finished my exam today~! Anyway:
1) In Scenario 17(28) when Boser was defeated by Bernhardt and gets Alhazard taken from him:
Boser: Do what with it whatever you please…
->I’m not sure whether this is actually correct but I would omit the ‘what’ or simply say “Do whatever you please with it…”
2) When Jessica says that she’s gonna have to get near to Bernhardt:
Aaron: Do you think you’ll walk away from the attempt?
-> I don’t know why but when I saw that I got the impression that she was gonna walk/turn away from her attempt lol….
I understand that the intention was meant to be along the lines of “Do you think that you’ll be able to survive this attempt?”.
I’m not sure whether you need to rephrase that ^_^
3) When you ask Aaron to join you instead of Lana:
Aaron: Very well. Then, do your best.
-> He wouldn’t say that to the group he’s staying on with right? I reckon that it probably was the direct translation from Japanese. Maybe “let’s do our best” would work better here.
I’ve checked that Scenarios 17(17), 18(31) and 18(33) are the variations of the same scenario. So the typos found are:
4) Prologue: With Langrisser still not having having achieved its full power…
-> double having
5) Erwin seems to have forgotten how to spell Rohga’s name and confused the positions of ‘g’ and ‘h’… These typos are at least found at:
a) The beginning of the scenario - Erwin: Is that Rogha leading the enemy search party…? Yes, it is Rogha!
b) Turn 2: Rogha …!
Yup, I think that’s it for now. How many hours do we have before our ‘test reporting abilities’ are halted?
June 6th, 2007 at 1:14 pm
Jesus christ. What a last minute report.
Do you realize that Rohga’s name is spelled wrong in eight other places in the script? Somehow no one ever reported this …
All the above fixed.
June 7th, 2007 at 4:03 am
I only played up to turn 2 last night and I somehow had the feeling that Rohga’s name will be misspelt quite a lot of times in the later turns, which is why I said ‘at least found at:’ 8 more Rohga typos? lol…. I’m not sure how many people were assigned to do the Light path but I’m sure that some of them would surely have spotted this typo…
Jesus christ. What a last minute report.
June 7th, 2007 at 4:05 am
What the.. I was gonna say:
Jesus christ. What a last minute report.
June 7th, 2007 at 4:07 am
Sorry for multiple posting. This is weird…. I’m very sure I typed something after that quotation.. Well, anyway, I had my exam and so, what was reported was what I had played right after the exam.. My bad.. ^_^;;;