Two things on Scenario 55
This one looks pretty good. I’ve already gone through tons of dialogue and only saw a couple of things, and one of them I’m not even sure it’s an issue.
That one is when Leon says, “We shall reclaim / Alhazard for His Majesty!” I could just swear there’s a double space between “for” and “His.”
The other one is Egbert talking to Boser,
I know not how our might
compares with the Descendants’
you fought in the past.
Followed by something to the tune of: but we’re gonna kick your ass. The sentence basically says Boser fought the Descendants’ Might, which is weird. I think it’d be grammatically correct if he said: “… compares with that of the Descendants you’ve fought in the past,” but I can’t see how to fit that in three lines.
Chaos hasn’t made an appearance yet. I’ll get back with that later today.
June 6th, 2007 at 1:05 pm
No double space.
Removed the ‘.