imperial 20(54)

sonya said this when i moved rohga near her, i haven’t attacked her so i think she should be saying “Even if i am defeated…”
at the end of the scenario,

i don’t know if there is anything wrong with this sentence, “I’ll always hate you, my brother!” sounds better?
June 2nd, 2007 at 8:40 am
Thanks. I’ll fix them up. I think the second one was probably meant to say she will always hate humans,. even her brother.
June 2nd, 2007 at 10:13 am
I looked into it.
The first window, I have changed “though” to “if”.
However, I would argue the second does not merit a change. It is the second of two windows, and it makes it very clear she is speaking to humans in general, not just Rohga.
You humans will never change. You only think of yourselves!{06}{07} I'll always hate you, even my brother!{end}June 2nd, 2007 at 5:24 pm
I agree on the second one… It doesn’t need to be changed…