Comments on: Scenario 15 (Light)

By: Senka

Senka — Thu, 31 May 2007 17:25:13 +0000

^was just about to say the same thing.

Alejandro Moreno — Thu, 31 May 2007 14:55:51 +0000

Is there a “the” missing before companions? Or have I not had enough coffee yet?

Frances — Thu, 31 May 2007 14:08:00 +0000

Yea~ Well done in rephrasing that *CLAPS*

Derrick — Thu, 31 May 2007 13:29:22 +0000

I did this:

After failing to steal a ship,
companions decided to
follow the path along the
riverbank to reach Velzeria.{06}{07}

Eric H. Krieger — Thu, 31 May 2007 13:28:25 +0000

Actually,

“Having failed to get to Velzeria by stealing a ship,” works, tho it is still awkward.

…I had another way to phrase this, but I’ve forgotten that fast >_

Derrick — Thu, 31 May 2007 12:30:12 +0000

Ok. Done.