Scenario 15 (Light)
Here’s a separate post about scenario 15:
1) For Scenario 15(26) - In the prologue, the losing condition is: “Erwin perished.” This should be ‘perishes’ like found in all the other scenarios so far.
2) What I’m going to play: Scenario 15(28) - The prologue has this line: “Having failed to get to Velzeria by failing to steal a ship, the companions decided to follow the path along the river bank.” It’s a little wordy here I think.. Maybe say something like “Due to the failure of stealing a ship to get to Velzeria, the companions decided to etc”
May 31st, 2007 at 8:30 am
Ok. Done.
May 31st, 2007 at 9:28 am
Actually,
“Having failed to get to Velzeria by stealing a ship,” works, tho it is still awkward.
…I had another way to phrase this, but I’ve forgotten that fast >_
May 31st, 2007 at 9:29 am
I did this:
After failing to steal a ship, companions decided to follow the path along the riverbank to reach Velzeria.{06}{07}May 31st, 2007 at 10:08 am
Yea~ Well done in rephrasing that
*CLAPS*
May 31st, 2007 at 10:55 am
Is there a “the” missing before companions? Or have I not had enough coffee yet?
May 31st, 2007 at 1:25 pm
^was just about to say the same thing.