Light Scenario 13
When you choose to defeat Boser, you get to Scenario 14 where you have to defeat Imelda. Anyway, at the start of the scenario, there’re some typos:
1. Lester: How fortunate.
-> Would be better to end that with an exclaimation mark.
2. Imelda: Don’t wast time with your worthless excuses!
-> waste
Anyway, I’ve decided to defeat Bernhardt instead to go to Scenario 25 where you have to defeat Esto and Osto.
3) So at the end of Scenario 13, Boser says: As I would expect from Descendants of Light!
-> Should there be a ‘the’ before Descendants?
4) Also, whether you choose to defeat Boser or Bernhardt, the party will talk about Alhazard and what it can do etc. Then it gets to this part:
Jessica: I will go ahead to search out Alhazard’s revival ceremony.
Jessica: The rest of you, please depart for Velzeria.
Erwin: All right…
Lester: Velzeria lies across the sea.
Lester: A port city lies just down the road. We can find a boat there.
All good so far. Then:
Jessica: I’m one step ahead of you. Let’s go to Velzeria.
Jessica: Lester, show us the way to Velzeria, please. (she disappears)
-> I’ll be? I don’t know, but it will seem to make more sense that way, since she did say that she’ll go ahead to locate the revival ceremony. And due to the fact that Jessica’s not going together with them as she can teleport and stuff (and did it anyway), it’s not very logical for her to ask Lester to “show us the way”. But I could be wrong. Also, although ‘Let’s go to Velzeria’ is technically correct, maybe we can say “Let’s head for Velzeria!” because that makes Velzeria more of a goal than just a place. Just my 2 cents =) So in the end, my suggestion is:
Jessica: I’ll be one step ahead of you. Lester, show them the way to Velzeria, please.
Jessica: Let’s head for Velzeria!
May 28th, 2007 at 12:37 pm
K. Done.